"Just wanted to say I really like the descriptions here! Your writing style is really engaging and works really well with the story to far. I feel like I'm watching a movie because I can see everything to clearly (like I'm flying with the dragons, overlooking the land as it is being destroyed)"

"Finished! This was really good, I loved how much detail you wrote about everything - especially of the city and the market. It set it up perfectly so you could actually picture what it looked and felt (and smelled) like...I thought it flowed well, the city sounds amazing, the characters are interesting. I also like the idea of them going against a cult, especially one known to kill people and bring them back to serve them... Can't wait to read more! "

"Wonderful so far!! I truly enjoyed my reading experience. Your writing put me directly into such a wondrous world.... WOAH!!! So cool!!! Love that twist on what a dwarf can do...Very magical!!!! Love it! ... You put me right there! Love the use of all the senses... Another wonderful description!! Well done!"